Tuesday, 8 October 2013

Revised Pitch and synopsis


Beelzebob Elevator pitch:

A young woman, Lilith, with a Personal Demon finds herself in trouble with the Devil after Bob, her demon, has been trying to get her to commit an unforgivable crime. The Devil believing Bob has succeeded tries to take her soul but Bob doesn’t let her fall into the Devils hands.




Synopsis

Lilith has an unfortunate situation that has landed her with her own Personal Demon, Beelzebob, or Bob for short. He has spent the last 4 years trying to persuade Lilith to commit an unforgivable crime, thus condemning her soul to the care of the Devil.

Now his chance has come.

After a long day searching for a new job, the exhausted Lilith goes home to find an over enthusiastic drug dealer taking payment with a knife. Bob takes this opportunity and Lilith finds herself struggling for her life and her soul.  

The Devil, thinking she has committed murder, arrives to take her soul. However Bob has a moment of morality that leads to him to tell the truth and saving Lilith’s soul.


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